Archive for July, 2010

Passages

Posted: July 23, 2010 in Uncategorized

This story I began about five years ago and finally whipped it into shape a few weeks ago.

It’s inspired by the short time my sister and I lived with my grandmother in Dunn Center, North Dakota and the trouble we got into and the sights we saw.  

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Passages

The gas station sits atop a broken hill of trees and crumpled earth. Made from giant river rocks and cement, it’s a simple creation. Out front, a pathetic ‘for sale’ sign swings from its metal post. It’s been there for years too long to count. But they still visit. Always have, every summer.The girls have never been inside; instead watching from a respectful distance. A foot hits a crumpled Coke can, sending it soaring, red and white blurring in a dizzying mess. The Youngest shushes her sister, the crumpled metal loud in the still afternoon.  

The Oldest laughs and then stops. Something’s different. This time she hears. Really hears. 

She can hear the old music, Patsy Cline maybe, Conway Twitty, drifitng from an old radio. Hear the men in their tattered coveralls with grease-stained hands, barking orders about transmissions and tune-ups.

And it is not enough for her to hear. She wants to see too.

The rusty doorknob is grasped and the door creaks open. Oldest and Youngest blink away falling dust and debris. They sniff at metallic air. Crooked nails hold the remnants of their grandfather’s tattered calendars, the years passed and forgotten. Newspapers wet with mildew cover the ground, ancient stories filling the headlines. It’s all they have to remember a man they have never met. 

The little shop groans as the first signs of life in 50 years pass through the doorway.

I’ve decided to ask a question about once a week or so on readers and writers opinions on…well, reading and writing. This little nugget will be called “The Write Way…”

So my question this week is one  that I debate over. Me – I am not a fan of Steinbeck…especially the Grapes of Wrath. I will admit this proudly and happily. What is the reason you ask? Well, I will tell you…it’s the description. Mind-numbing, long, drawn-out description. Now, to each his own. But this begs the question….

In your opinion, What is the Write Way for [good] Description? Short and Sweet? Or Long and Wordy?

Read the Grapes of Wrath or I will put this cigarette out on your face.

Documents Caracasses

Posted: July 15, 2010 in Uncategorized

I have JM Prescott to thank for this inspiration. Check out her website at:
http://jmprescott.blogspot.com
. Every week she posts a dare and some insightful writing knowledge that fuels me through. Much thanks to her. 

Her weekly blog challenge was a dare to write a poem or flash based on a captcha.

This is what inspired me.

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Documents Carcasses

It’s all he needs.

His ’62 Chevy, a winding and tattered back road, blue ink and a notebook.

Throw in some Stones tunes and he’s got it made. Sunday is his day; not the Lord’s, not his mother’s, who calls every morning at 6am on the dot. It’s his. Personal and private. He wouldn’t be ashamed if people knew but the secretive act — just for him — makes it so much cooler.

And so he drives until he finds them.

He still remembers his first. He had been 10, walking home from school when something brown caught his eye. Lying in the ditch, so still, so small. It was a raccoon and by the looks of it, a car had taken it out. His hand twitched. The notebook was out and before realizing, he had scribbled: Brown raccoon, hit by a car. Accident. April 6, 1954.

Since then he’s kept tedious record of the broken carcasses on the sides of the roads he’s traveled.

But they’re not always on the side of the road. And they’re not always accidents. The day he found Jimmy Cooper’s dog slashed in the stomach and buried underneath an old oak tree, he knew Jimmy was someone to stay away from. Buster the Beagle, disemboweled. Murder. September 8, 1960.

It wasn’t as thrilling to write as he would have thought.  And a year later, he wasn’t surprised when Jimmy got sent to juvie.

Today, he pulls over, seeing what he wants. It’s tan and still graceful, even in death. He writes: Fallen doe, old age. Natural causes. October 20, 1984.

He looks down at his aging hands, not yet covered with the brown of age but one day.

And he sighs, wishing he could document his self.

Breakdown…

Posted: July 7, 2010 in Uncategorized

Thanks to everyone who read “Quotes”. That story was inspired by random quotes and conversations I have eavesdropped on over the years. I keep a journal and write  the best ones down for future fodder (And you’ll never know who you are! If you do, sorry for poaching your words).

“Quotes” was a random night of writing – finished in less than three hours. And it’s odd…sometimes I feel like the stories I “just write” turn out the best. Having time to proof…to think about them leads you to obsess, change things that might be good or make the story worse. But there’s no decisive way in the end. To each their own.

The motto that gets me through whipping out a story is something said to me by one of my professors during my college career. The one thing that’s stuck with me this long: “Don’t Think. Just Write.”

Words of [expensive] wisdom.

Quote #7

Posted: July 7, 2010 in Uncategorized

7.       I love my strings, but sometimes wish they weren’t so attached

Hearing the woman at the lotto stand say this, she writes the check with even more vigor. She hands it to the cashier and bolts from the store forgetting the plastic sack filled with fruit and Grape Nuts (for the fiber) that rests on the counter.

Because sometimes the lotto-woman is right.

Sometimes she just wants to cut the cord.

Quote #6

Posted: July 2, 2010 in Uncategorized

6.       Do not hustle my patient

Says the nurse. The nurse is fierce and she loves her for that. 

She’ll push when she’s good and ready.

And if that time never comes…well, she’ll just push.

Quote #5

Posted: July 2, 2010 in Uncategorized

5.       You know what they say, don’t you?

Enlighten me, she says and her voice comes out hard and raspy. She needs to give up smoking and maybe take up the gym again. But she’s skinny for now and can live with that.

They say yes, he says. You say yes. He twists the ring on her finger.

It pinches but she agrees anyways.